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[Occurence Without Meaning]

AWESOME!

Short review but i just had to say i love this tune =D.

[-{EP}- Time For Dance RMX]

Holy...flipping...crap...woah...

This is definately your best and i think its one of the best songs on all of NG. No, im not just saying that to be nice i mean it! I LOVE THIS!!!

Very nice R3MiX. I agree with everything kr1z said except i would say the best part was the rythm. Very, VERY nice work.

10/10
5/5
Fav'd

ErikPaladin responds:

Thanks sooooo much, Jesse! Love ya \o\

[MC BigBoy--Internal Beauty]

Simply amazing.

This is a VERY beautiful piece. The thing about this song that makes it stand out from the rest of your songs and 90% percent of the songs on NG is its quality.

FX:
1. Reveerb = 10/10 (vvvveeerrryyyy nice)
2. Reverse crash = 8/10 (Could use a higher pitch with Fruity EQ 2)

Sounds:
1. Piano = 10/10
2. Pads/strings = 10/10
3. Bass = 10/10
4. Beat = 10/10
5. Overall sound = 10/10

Set up:
1. Intro (0:00-0:25) = 10/10 (Very nice piano quality)
2. Tranistion tune (0:25-0:39) = 9/10 (The piano has seemed to lose its reveerb...But i LOVE how the strings come in.)
3. Chorus = 10/10 (Very deep. It captures a very calm feeling)
4. Flow = 10/10 (Theres no adrupt stops and it flows very calmly)
5. Overall set up = 9.8/10

Tune/Melody:
1. Feeling = This song creates a very calm nice feel to it. You have seemed to have done this perfectly so i can't offer any advice on how to improve it! - 10/10
2. Velocity of notes = To make this song seem more proffesional you can try changing the volume of each note making some louder and some quieter then others. - 9/10
3. Bassline = I love this bassline. You found the perfect notes for this song. Only thing i can think of is to add a second bassline that would occansially play in the song. - 10/10
4. Overall = Extremely genius = 10/10

Things to improve:
1. Kick = You can deepen your kick and edit it very easily with the effect "Fruity EQ". I found the kick in this song was deep yet it didn't lead the song. Try editing it so it doesn't sound like a far off sound in the song but more like a whole background to it.
2. Reverse crash = Try adding a delay bank or editing with "Fruity EQ 2" to make it sound better. Also you can add a pitch automation to make it rise or lower in pitch as it plays! A phaser can also help.

This is a very nice song and i can safely say that you improved by 100x. Insane work man!

10/10
5/5

(Whatever you do don't stop making music)

Yodamanjaro responds:

Thank you for your very* long review.

When I mastered the song, I cut out a lot of higher-end sounds, just so it wouldn't pierce anyone's ears. But, I'll do thta, and re-submit it. Maybe I'll make it more dance than quiet and calming...

[Hamster Dance Loloop]

Really good

Awesome! Too bad its only 52 seconds long =P. I would love to hear a full version.

AWESOME STUFF!
10/10
5/5

(Check out my "Hampster Dance Remix" sometime =D.)

dittyboppoo responds:

Oh I will make a full version eventually =)

Thanks! =D

[Mechanical Hazard]

Nice!

Very nice! I still can't believe this is your first song! I did promise i would write a helpful review so here goes.

Tips:
1. Beat - Should maybe be a little louder so it doesn't get lost behind the guitars. This would give it a more complete feel.
2. Guitars - Maybe add some reveerb. (You may not know how to do that but i can teach you over msn)

Things to add: (These are tottaly up to you)
1. Bass guitar - This would add a nice effect
2. Extra instrument - Examples: Orchestra strings, high techno noise, pad.

I hope that helps!!!

9/10
5/5

[~Goddess~ -hania]

Very nice.

This is one of my favourites from you! The flow of the song is excellent! You are definately one of the top artists on this site =O.

10/10
5/5
Favourited*

[marios bros!]

Hmmmm

Well this isn't the best i have heard. Its in the wrong key =P. Also that main sound in the beggining should be taken out because it can be harmful to people's ears.

I hope that helps =P.

[Ghostwave]

Nice!!!

Awesome song!!! Only thing i see that needs work is maybe you could add some reveerb and a little delay on the main synth =D.

This is definately one of the top songs on this site!

10/10
5/5

-Check out my stuff sometime!-

NemesisTheory responds:

Hey man. I agree on the reeverb/delay effects, but as I said a few pages back I wasn't sure how that'd turn out in a big club with the volume cranked. I'll definitely try it in my future submission though, so no worries. :)

Thanks for the review, and I'll drop by your audiopage tomorrow after I rape the Devil May Cry 4 demo to hell and back and leave a review! :)

[[LR] Pointless Beat]

Awesome

Maybe you could make this into a full song! Just add some bass and some leads and you can have a whole song going! Awesome work!

9/10
5/5

(Check out my stuff sometime)

Little-Radiodemon responds:

Hmm, okay, this is the longest thing I have made recently I think, but alright thanks.

[Building a home]

Wow

Very nice! Would have been really cool if you added a secondary instrument when the beat came in to make it have a more climatic feel to it. Awesome stuff!!!

10/10
5/5

(Check out my stuff if you got time =D)