F-777's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Farting Should Not Be A Crime]

Hahahaha!

Oh man this is funny!

10/10
5/5
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IceWave-Z responds:

OMG THANKS!!!! I CANT BEEELIEVE A LEGEND LIKE YOU IS REVIEWING ONE OF MY... well this is not really a song, but its funny al right. Im a big fan :)

[Piano in the Wind]

Not bad!

Not bad! To make it better the piano could have some reveerb and maybe turn up the hardness so its more clear.

8/10
5/5

[DJ Derrick--Walking in Silence]

Awesome.

No in this case you would want to say "Hate the person, love the sin" cause im guessing the sin is the song? I make no sense lol XD.

Awesome work. Bass is well controlled. Guitar is high pitched without hurting the ears, thats also controled very nicely. I think we all know the melody pwns. The reverse crash was VERY nice. Did you do anything different to it? Or is it just the volume level is different?

Im amazed!
10/10
5/5 (Making your score 4.72/5.00)

Awesome work! (Oh and i love the drums!)

Yodamanjaro responds:

Thank you for the review man!

btw did you like the wind at the very end? I added that throughout the whole song basically (except for a few parts). It fills up the song, makes it sound lively.

I just changed volumes, um...I think that's it. I guess I did good then. btw The collab should be up here in a bit. So...stay tuned to that!

MC BigBoy

[Welcome to Kyoto]

Awesome!

You definately have talent! All you need is experience and to get that you have to keep making music =D.

Good job!

9/10
5/5

CosmicGamez responds:

Thanks again for the review.

[It's Time to Dance]

Very nice!

Awesome work! I must say im impressed! You are improving very fast and give it enough time you can become one of the top artists on this site.

Incredible work with the vocoder!!!

CosmicGamez responds:

Thanks man, I really appreciate it.

[Occurence Without Meaning]

AWESOME!

Short review but i just had to say i love this tune =D.

[-{EP}- Time For Dance RMX]

Holy...flipping...crap...woah...

This is definately your best and i think its one of the best songs on all of NG. No, im not just saying that to be nice i mean it! I LOVE THIS!!!

Very nice R3MiX. I agree with everything kr1z said except i would say the best part was the rythm. Very, VERY nice work.

10/10
5/5
Fav'd

ErikPaladin responds:

Thanks sooooo much, Jesse! Love ya \o\

[MC BigBoy--Internal Beauty]

Simply amazing.

This is a VERY beautiful piece. The thing about this song that makes it stand out from the rest of your songs and 90% percent of the songs on NG is its quality.

FX:
1. Reveerb = 10/10 (vvvveeerrryyyy nice)
2. Reverse crash = 8/10 (Could use a higher pitch with Fruity EQ 2)

Sounds:
1. Piano = 10/10
2. Pads/strings = 10/10
3. Bass = 10/10
4. Beat = 10/10
5. Overall sound = 10/10

Set up:
1. Intro (0:00-0:25) = 10/10 (Very nice piano quality)
2. Tranistion tune (0:25-0:39) = 9/10 (The piano has seemed to lose its reveerb...But i LOVE how the strings come in.)
3. Chorus = 10/10 (Very deep. It captures a very calm feeling)
4. Flow = 10/10 (Theres no adrupt stops and it flows very calmly)
5. Overall set up = 9.8/10

Tune/Melody:
1. Feeling = This song creates a very calm nice feel to it. You have seemed to have done this perfectly so i can't offer any advice on how to improve it! - 10/10
2. Velocity of notes = To make this song seem more proffesional you can try changing the volume of each note making some louder and some quieter then others. - 9/10
3. Bassline = I love this bassline. You found the perfect notes for this song. Only thing i can think of is to add a second bassline that would occansially play in the song. - 10/10
4. Overall = Extremely genius = 10/10

Things to improve:
1. Kick = You can deepen your kick and edit it very easily with the effect "Fruity EQ". I found the kick in this song was deep yet it didn't lead the song. Try editing it so it doesn't sound like a far off sound in the song but more like a whole background to it.
2. Reverse crash = Try adding a delay bank or editing with "Fruity EQ 2" to make it sound better. Also you can add a pitch automation to make it rise or lower in pitch as it plays! A phaser can also help.

This is a very nice song and i can safely say that you improved by 100x. Insane work man!

10/10
5/5

(Whatever you do don't stop making music)

Yodamanjaro responds:

Thank you for your very* long review.

When I mastered the song, I cut out a lot of higher-end sounds, just so it wouldn't pierce anyone's ears. But, I'll do thta, and re-submit it. Maybe I'll make it more dance than quiet and calming...

[Hamster Dance Loloop]

Really good

Awesome! Too bad its only 52 seconds long =P. I would love to hear a full version.

AWESOME STUFF!
10/10
5/5

(Check out my "Hampster Dance Remix" sometime =D.)

dittyboppoo responds:

Oh I will make a full version eventually =)

Thanks! =D

[Mechanical Hazard]

Nice!

Very nice! I still can't believe this is your first song! I did promise i would write a helpful review so here goes.

Tips:
1. Beat - Should maybe be a little louder so it doesn't get lost behind the guitars. This would give it a more complete feel.
2. Guitars - Maybe add some reveerb. (You may not know how to do that but i can teach you over msn)

Things to add: (These are tottaly up to you)
1. Bass guitar - This would add a nice effect
2. Extra instrument - Examples: Orchestra strings, high techno noise, pad.

I hope that helps!!!

9/10
5/5