Nice =).
This is really awesome man =O.
Strengths:
1. Bass was AMAZING!
2. The buildups were very "Kr1z-like" haha awesome work!
3. The chorus was very deep i love it =).
4. I like how the beat keeps dropping but then coming right back in.
5. Melody is awesome =).
Advice:
Turn the hi hat down. It would work better as a link between the kicks instead of this clinky thing on top =p. (Thats all i have for advice)
10/10
5/5
Keep it up man and make sure you pm me when you post the full version!!
(This could seriously be one of the best trance songs on NG when its finished)