Nice work!
Sounds really good and you are improving really fast, my only advice is
when you do a song with vocals just maybe bring the main voice in a little
earlier =). I knew there were going to be more lyrics cause i read the
description but if i never have read the description the lyrics would have
been a huge surprise. I think you can do more with the lyrics, keep working
on it!
9/10
5/5
Really enjoyed this piece!