Not bad
Ill start this out with it is a pretty nice remix!
Good job on this.
The only advice i have is it sounds a little empty....sssssooo...
1. You should have like 3 or 4 instruments doing the background and like 2 instruments doing the main melody at the same time...This would make it sound MUCH better and more complete.
But you have to be careful to make sure all the background is quieter than the melody...
2. You could add in a high thing like special FX or somthing but this part is entirely up to you and how you want your song.
3. drums need more symbals and stuff.
Anyways i congrajulate you on this you did a nice job! im going to give you a 5/5 to help increase the rating.
pm me later if you make any more pieces!
see ya man.