Awesome
This is sweet. I know you said it isn't mastered but also try putting a compresser on the master channel to prevent overdrives of static. Also the Crash cymbol is too loud and really hurts so try making it lower so it blends with it.
1. Beat = 8/10 (The distorted snare wasn't that great)
2. Bassline = 6/10 (Thats the most common bassline used in the world so i wouldn't suggest just making a tune following it because its been done millions of times...try making a whole different tune that fits it)
3. Set up = 10/10 (I like the set up)
4. Flow = 9//10 (Too much static it feels like its choppy)
5. Overall = 8/10
Its a really good song! If you ever master it and post the finished version pm me!
8/10
5/5
Good luck with future songs!!!!