Suggestions!
I will give you ideas on how to improve this since thats what your asking for. So don't think im telling you the song is bad cause its not im just giving helpful tips to make it better =).
Tips:
1. Intro could have lasted a little longer and also the transition from the first sound was quite abrubt like Hades0013 said.
- To fix that you can have a reverse crash, wind effect, or a little drum snare roll to switch it over for a smooth transition.
- Or you could fade the guitar slowly in and the first instrument slowly out untill its just the guitar =).
2. Your guitar does sound dry. Thats normal with FL Slayer.
- Add reveerb (i think you might have done this)
- In the Fl Slayer box enable "Dub Delay".
- Add a chorus =).
- Maybe a phaser or flanger if you find it suits it better.
- Layer it with a more wet sound.
3. Drums are a bit quiet. I would recommend turning them up a touch =).
4. Little repetitive.
- I would add a second melody.
- Maybe add a little slow string/pad breakdown to another buildup.
- Maybe add yet another instrument to take over =).
This is really good! Don't take my tips as "Oh you suck" kinda thing because i only give tips to songs that i believe are worth it ;D.
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Awesome work here! Let me know when the full version is out =D.