Nice!
First off your melodies are awesome. I like the setup of this song but the overall piece seems a little empty. Try adding FX or more intruments/arps/gates to keep this really interesting and full of sound with the lead and drums on top of it all =). Awesome melodies though you got some really great ideas that i just love.
9/10
5/5
Keep it up!
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